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Friday, January 30, 2009

Haiku for a Winter Day Long Ago

Haiku FridayMy coat's a blanket.
My love, sleeping on a bus;
blue wool breathes with him.

Lying on the seat
soft hair brushes the collar
tucked under his chin.

I want to paint him;
freeze him, lips blue under ice;
encase him in glass.

He may wake sighing.
Worries -- gone in sleep -- descend
all in an instant.

But I've forgotten
all that came before this and
all that came after.

This moment only
is encased in memory
as if in amber.

3 comments:

  1. Nicely done - it would be nice, wouldn't it to save for re-savouring those special moments.

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  2. "But I’ve forgotten
    all that came before this and
    all that came after."

    that's my favorite part ...

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  3. "wow," whispered Sophie, "that is what authentic poetry looks like."

    Thank you.

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